Tuesday, September 19, 2017

Essay Reflection

Essay Reflection

In this past 4 weeks, we had assignments to read and based on that then we wrote the essays.  In this essay, I just wrote based on my experiences so I did not really follow the rules (TEA). It is because after my first draft, I feel like  the way I wrote for my essay seems smooth because I wrote like from my childhood through teenagers experiences. I did use some starting sentences to explain the quote based on reading from They say, I say. It is helpful because I did not know how to explain it first. I feel like this essay I can reflect my own experiences and connect with author. Also, Professor Dan knows more about me where I come from so it is good thing.

So as a definition of academic writing for my essay 1, I feel like I still have a lot more to accomplish a goal. It is because I feel like my essay 1 is simple. I mean the structure of writing is simple, implicit and repetitive vocabularies  So my goal for the next essay is following the TEA and using more academic vocabularies to stronger my essay.

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