Thursday, September 14, 2017

Pre Write: Draft (09/13/2017)

How do I feel about my draft?
  I think my draft should be okay for today because it's just only looking for the ideas and responses to the prompt. But I feel like I still need to fix my grammar and the structure of the paragraphs for my final draft. It's because my essay is spreading out the ideas all over so I need to rearrange in order and develop the good thesis. The last thing is my conclusion. I still need to think how to conclude and connect back with my body paragraphs or maybe talk more about future experiences.

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