PW(11/30/17)
First, I will read your feedback and see what I still need to improve on like either structure and ideas to expand. Probably, I might go to tutoring to revise and edit my grammar. Also, I will think about the prompt like connecting back with thesis every body paragraphs. For example in Essay#2, there is one body paragraph I need to connect back with my thesis.
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